The one and only thing I want people to read is my own piece. I want them to feel the same way I did when I wrote those. The pieces I wrote are based on my feelings at the moment and sometimes I wrote it based on other people feelings.
I've wrote a piece about my friend having her heart broken at that time and inside it I also inserted some lines that indicated her hope of what she wanted her relationship will become of and what had happened to her before this. New Love were dedicated for her.
New Love
I looked into your eyes,
You smiled gently to me,
Filled my ears with gentle words,
But deep down in my heart,
I felt pain, only pain…
The pain that I felt for the past,
The tears that I shed,
The cruel deal,
The memories that I would never forget...
The past had made me blind,
For I could not see you today,
The future you desired for us to build together,
I wasted it…
The raindrops that I heard slowly stopped,
It was the rainbow that I saw now,
For the hope that you and I
could build together…
Even though my eyes are now see only you,
You made my heart shattered,
For you could not love me the way you used to…
Please dear,
I’ll bloom love from the hope that you gave me
for one last time…
The new love that you will shower me
and the love from me to you,
We’ll live through this eternity love
hand in hand…
9 comments:
although i do not approve of ur changing the challenge, that is a nice poem! :P dedicated to who??? *sebok*
cbe bukak fb ak kat notes tu.
btw, thanks!
okay
btw, x dpt la.. wat do u mean fb kat notes? aku bkk fb ko, x de notes pon.. mane nk carik notes ek?
eh? erm, kat blh kiri yg de tulis wall, photos tu sume..
kalo x de tu maknenye ak x tau la mcm mane nk bg notes tu visible kat korang.
kawan ak kat mlaka, die budak degree. ko x nah jumpe die.
ooo.. yg ko g jumpe dlu tu ek? huhuu... mmg x de la notes tu.. :P
a'ah.
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